But thought I would tackle it in chunksand give you reviews as I go. Actually I had said that I would only read a chapter.. but I couldn't stop! You evil one! It is 12:45!

You have done so much research! It really shows and makes the story so much more deep and believable.

Is Tielo supposed to be Orli/Legolas? Because they are similar. So very sweet and romantic and soft-spoken and brave and ... well just everything you would want in a hero. And his name is very similar to "I love you" in Sindarin.

I love Cara! Her powers are awesome. And how original to have it be a reincarnation story! Gosh the roman bit was so very sad. My heart is heavy.

You have a wonderful mind for plot. Just wonderful.

Your writing style is gorgeous! The older stuff is seen through a soft hazy lense that makes halos around the lights, but still you can smell the acrid scents of battle. The more modern stuff immediately brightens but still retains its mystery and intrigue. Really quite brilliant the way you can evoke ancient Gaels and then turn around and do modern Ireland and sweet romance. Very impressive.

Oo.. and the part about the bracelet is so wonderful. I love all the nuances of power and connection. *wiggle of excitment*

This is such a very romantic and wonderful fiction. Tielo and Cara are perfect for each other and their relationship is so so sweet. I love Mary too. This is a dream romance, grrrl!

This is an AWESOME story!

WONDERFUL JOB! I am really enjoying this. I will keep you updated as I go along.

Aloha,

Chris